Did this improve?
Not so much I'm afraid. True, the line work did get more refined in later pages. They still don't help the comic. There's this level of bad composition and murky anatomy that continually steps in the way of investing in the story. As for the writing, there was a chance that the sub-par art could have been forgiven if the dialog and action had been more interesting to read. JVTNWO doesn't give us anything to root for, other than James Contrell, the story's hero, committing acts of counter-violence in the name of being 'bad-ass' and all.
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