At least the story holds up.
That being said Aquila does a decent job of laying out its action and putting together a cohesive story. Annie and Jon are government agents contracted to evict unwanted squatters from a section of the city slated for renovation. A '20 years ago' section title sets this up as the past. Then we skip to a few days ago, the problems of the past have been resolved (or have they?) and Annie (who wants to go by 'Aquila') is now a powerful political figure, along with her partner Jon. There's a fair amount of slickness, and the story was readable if not really that interesting.
The problem is that the titular character is actually a villain in this tale. Aquila isn't structured to take that into account, like Irvine Welsh's Filth or Oscar Wilde's Portrait of Dorian Gray, where you revile in the layers of depravity Annie/Aquila and Jon can descend. A pity.
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