Not enough room for the fight.
The last few pages have some fighting scenes between Snow Paw and the other werewolves. What could have been a dynamic and heart-pounding struggle gets hampered by a sudden lack of room, there are few pages left to depict the fighting.
I understand Rob is making his comic his way because he has a vision of how it should turn out. My criticism stems from my personal visual tastes. As it is, I wonder if maybe Snow Paw could have benefited by working out and choreographing the fighting with more reader engagement in mind.
Lastly, there's a sort of unanswered question in my head, as to 'why' Cirilla is part werewolf to begin with? Did she get bit by one? Is there a long lineage of wolf-blood in her life she doesn't know about? Her transformation just 'is.'...
Perhaps those questions will be answered in the subsequent issues. As it is, Snow Paw does end on an interesting cliff hanger.
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