A Hint Of What's To Come
Here's the first sentence in the new book. It may change, but this is how it stands at the moment.
And yes, I have written more than one sentence. I'm a meanie who doesn't want to share more just yet.
The wooden door rattled and a sliver of ugly fluorescent light prodded Liam’s eyelids.
I've been pondering whether to put a comma between 'ugly' and 'fluorescent', but I think the former is a cumulative adjective in this sentence rather than a coordinate one, so I've omitted the comma. I might change my mind before I publish.
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